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Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22
Posts 149


0 posted 2006-06-13 02:40 AM


Sad and wasted
ruse in ruins
hide  pale casings
of our scars.

Just as our cars
long left us laughing
who can know how hurt

they are?

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Many Thanks to "Klassy Lassy" for the inspiration of this one...

Will Rhyme

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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187
Oregon
1 posted 2006-06-13 10:28 PM


Ohhhh!  Memories.  We leave a lot by the wayside as we get older--I hope not the laughter, but some joyrides just end badly and we never let it show.

You truly blew me away with this one! ~ Klassy


Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2006-06-14 03:17 PM


unfortunately some things we dont want to end do end, nice write

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

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