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sins of sea |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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there at the edge of shuddering just before the waves come and make your hands useless for anything but hanging on when your eyes are sunset amber and your hair is unconcerned about proper positioning it only knows it is in the way when you try to breathe when something inside your soul recognizes the addiction and admits it has always been there wanting more than the last time til your heart is sore from the anticipation and then the fulfillment that is better than imagination and better than a memory you don't want to ever forget unless this next one is even better _________________ daark scribblenote: surfer's point ventura |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh God, this so took me to the sea...and yes, it is an addiction, a love addiciton, one cannot get enough of...the sea IS a soul filled place making one forget about all there is, only the here and now, and the peacfulness that washes over soul and mind...you've done a fabulous job describing. So well, that I felt like I was swimming.... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You can do this with any subject, can't you? Alright....how about...let me think...umm.. Climbing a tree?  Impress me..please."too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Raindancer New Member
since 2006-06-07
Posts 6Dancing in the rain |
the images from this are stunning, nice poetry to read Rain If you ask me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
stunning as ever *sighs* loved this ‘I want to swim away |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I am going to the sea this week.....Wednesday, I think....I need a fix. You remind me just how long it has been.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 so now that I am smiling againand for some reason missing that bend of the coast, the islands in the background...oh, but the sequence of waves you gave with this write? ~sigh~ |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
you hit the nail on the head with this one |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I've never been to the sea, and yet I can see how one could become addicted to it. I can't wait to go there.  ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
from the anticipation and then the fulfillment that is better than imagination and better than a memory you don't want to ever forget unless this next one is even better ~*~ A surfer always knows in some swelling wave that the next one will always be better... and the next, and the next, and the next.... just in case the previous were only an illusion but never a regret... right?  Ride on...  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
unless this next one is even better we can only hope so.  and i'm saving that next dance for you...keeping the dance floor warm and slippery..... love the scribblenotes |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
I am in the desert, but oh, it is so lovely here. Do it some more. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
the endless rushing, hushing of waves... held in the throes of earth her breast beating for wings and sky ~ Klassy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your writing forms like the lines of an outside set that takes it's time rolling in. Love the splash and all that~ Nice ride, DS~ |
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