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passing shadows
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0 posted 2006-05-30 10:09 AM



Your dad has cancer.
Guess you know now how I felt
when you were dying.


© Copyright 2006 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
sandgrain
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1 posted 2006-05-30 10:21 AM


Good write on a very sad subject.

   Rae

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2006-05-30 10:31 AM


god this hurts
big time

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-05-30 10:37 AM


yes, it does hurt

thanks ladies

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4 posted 2006-05-30 12:20 PM


Hurt comes in so many different forms..

Goldenrose.

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5 posted 2006-05-30 07:55 PM


Hisssssssssss    ::smiles::   (((Dixie)))
Honeybee
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6 posted 2006-05-30 08:01 PM


This hurt to read...I'm so sorry Dixie for all you've been through

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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7 posted 2006-05-31 01:56 AM


poetry is a wonderful thing, especially with interpretation, some know more than others, yet we express it so well.

a poet who cares

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8 posted 2006-05-31 08:57 PM


Nice writing...hugs...James
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9 posted 2006-05-31 10:38 PM


Yes, yes it does.  Thanx Dix.
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10 posted 2006-06-01 12:19 PM


Phil, thanks for understanding

{{{Larry}}} thank you

Melissa, thank you so much...things do get better I know

Christopher, yes, you are right and thanks

James, hugs right back atcha

Barry, I knew you would understand

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