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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
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0 posted 2006-08-24 11:05 PM


My sight has never been shadowed before.
When you came, my sight had become
Shadowwed, by  your love.

By my sight I saw the world in light,
with the coming of your love.
I have been delivered into the night.

You've taken my heart, with your loving sight
From your love I have grown,
With forever love for you.

Then I lost that love, for being a crazy man.
Losing you by letting my anger control me,
Letting that anger over ride my love for you.

Now I'm out of your loving shadow,
I still feel the cold air of being in your shadow.

Now as I sit here, your shadow is as warm
As your love for me.

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
1 posted 2006-08-25 01:31 AM



"Now as I sit here, your shadow is as warm
As your love for me."

Powerful Neotec...

Neotec
Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

2 posted 2006-08-25 01:36 AM


Thank you : )

lovely Laidy

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