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Open Poetry #38
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aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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0 posted 2006-08-24 10:45 PM


Verbiage in.

I got her letter today
And I read it slowly
One paragraph
An hour
The intensity over powered me
And I got lost
In too many words.

Verbiage out.

aziza

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Neotec
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since 2006-08-22
Posts 112

1 posted 2006-08-24 11:52 PM


short is long, long is short, to read is to live and to live is to read, love is there and love is not, shine and dark, but living is the part, and reading is the light.
nice read and i hope that helps some : )

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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2 posted 2006-08-25 01:28 AM


oh yes!

"One paragraph
An hour"

love it...


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