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Open Poetry #38

Limpid Perception.

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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0 posted 2006-05-27 07:05 PM

Twilight...nestles.
Birdsong...ascends.
Dreams...polarise,
within minds,
buoyantly drifting
through lucid
milieu's luminous.

''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God''
Psalm 42:1

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

1 posted 2006-05-27 07:24 PM

ethereal thoughts, unveiled gently
~thank you, Phil~

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2006-05-27 07:26 PM

Thank you Kacy...i was walking in twilight..with orange skies above..and this drifted into my thought..

Goldenrose.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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California

3 posted 2006-05-27 07:29 PM

If I close my eyes I am there too...lovely!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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4 posted 2006-05-27 07:34 PM

Martie..thank you very much for your kind reply..just having you comment on my poetry is an honour...knowing you are here with us is the best part of having you comment..thank you so much..

Goldenrose.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2006-05-27 08:53 PM

So dreamy, ethereal and beautifully ended

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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