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picturegramic
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since 2006-05-16
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0 posted 2006-05-23 10:10 PM


WHEN YOU GO...

Take the grapes, oranges, and apples
take all the early shadows

when you go...

take the early morning sunlight, green leaves
take the roses, thorns, and breeze

when you go....

take the voices of the waterfalls
take the first infants giggle

when you go....

take the whispers from the birds
take the silence of a sunset

when you go....

take the stillness of the mountains
take the colors of a rainbow

when you go....

take summer, winter, spring and fall
take the spice of life

when you go.....

take the doe, licking her fawn
take the intimate twilight zones

when you go....

take the sweetness of a woman
take her screams, her moans

when you go...

take each of our breathing moments
take them ALL...

when you go.

picturegramic :)

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shirtless
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since 2006-04-29
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1 posted 2006-05-23 10:14 PM


WOW!
WOW is a word that definitely should have more letters. How about WOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOWWOW!

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2006-05-23 10:17 PM



OH MY!!!   W O N D E R F U L !!

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

latearrival
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3 posted 2006-05-24 05:22 AM


Perfect! martyjo
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2006-05-24 05:43 AM


stunning piece!
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