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Zara14
Junior Member

since 2006-06-27

Posts 11
Northen Ireland

0 posted 2006-06-30 02:46 PM

A loving Grandmother
Full of warmth and laughter
You keep me safe just by being near
And help me when things get bad
You are every thing to me
My life my soul and my laughter
But you went to that special place
And left me alone with no laughter or warmth
Just pain and sadness and tears that were never there before
I have always loved you and I always will
My dear loving Grandmother

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-06-30 03:43 PM

Such a beautiful heartfelt write Zara.
A wonderful tribute to your Granmother.
Oh! Welcome to Passions!
Hugs~Nancy

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-06-30 04:24 PM

Dear Zara, welcome to PIP.

I love your beautiful tribute to your Grandmother, love and gratitude are deeply felt.

I had such a loving Grandmother too and even though I am a Grandmother myself now, I still keep her in my heart. A love that will never end.

Love,
Margherita

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2006-06-30 05:07 PM

"But you went to that special place
And left me alone with no laughter or warmth"

This poem is very touching. I can imagine how sad you are feeling. But you, know she is still with you and always will be. You will think of her often and remember things she taught you, so she will be beside you, guiding you. best to you, martyjo

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2006-06-30 06:11 PM

Very nice!!

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Zara14
Junior Member

since 2006-06-27

Posts 11
Northen Ireland

5 posted 2006-07-01 11:03 AM

sorry but this is not a tribute to my grandmother who is still verry much still alive but is a poem from a story wtich i am cerantly writeing but im glad you like it

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

6 posted 2006-07-01 10:06 PM

I hope my grandchildren know this when I leave...everyone of them is a smile I carry in my heart daily, including my great granddaughter-- now just four weeks old.

Your poem is very touching.

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

7 posted 2006-07-01 11:41 PM

I know of such loss having lost most of my family. May God strenghten you in this time of sorrow. The poem is a lovely Tribute to all of our grandmothers.

Huggs Kimberly

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

8 posted 2006-07-02 01:10 AM

Its a beautiful poem you should include it in your book. Loved it and am happy .

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

9 posted 2006-07-02 01:24 AM

Your thoughts rather for your own grandmother or a fictional one are still beautiful. martyjo

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