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UseTheIllusion
Member

since 2006-02-06

Posts 223
In a state of limbo

0 posted 2006-06-29 02:19 PM

Splatter you words cross the pages,
Like blood spilled in battle,
The sentences that enrage,
Your soul trapped in a cage,
Turn the page,
Your fingers move full throttle.

You write down the words,
You pour sweat and tears,
And what’s it all for?
To ease your fears,
Release your demons,
In a show of force,
Over the many years,
With no remorse.

I punch a wall every night,
Through the use of the letters,
Releasing my demons as the stars shine bright,
My words at best are unfettered.

Straight from my heart,
To your eyes,
I eagerly await your replies,
At least it’s a start,
To finding myself,
Mending the pieces which fell apart.

The words are like needles,
The sentences thread,
Mending my soul,
Which once lay dead,
Resuscitation is now in session,
Every night before I go to bed.

I write from the soul,
Report on places nobody goes,
Trekking through my psyche,
Perhaps a lot like yours?
Maybe it bores,
Maybe it rings cords,
But either way my spirit soars,
Above the trivialities of life,
And others words which cut into my heart like a knife,
This is my life,
I live to write,
And no one can tell me it is wrong or right.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-06-29 02:22 PM

this certainly rung a chord for me...
excellent writing, with great passion and loyalty to one's beliefs....

lokiwolf
Junior Member

since 2006-06-27

Posts 31

2 posted 2006-06-29 02:25 PM

wow

wow! nice! I love it!

ChaoticHazeLight
Member

since 2006-06-13

Posts 71
California, U.S.

3 posted 2006-06-29 02:50 PM

You flow well. I liked it alot and can relate. Do what you love and understand.

- Haze

UseTheIllusion
Member

since 2006-02-06

Posts 223
In a state of limbo

4 posted 2006-07-01 02:29 PM

Thank you all for your kind comments.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-07-01 09:16 PM

"I live to write,
And no one can tell me
it is wrong or right."

Write - On...

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

6 posted 2006-07-01 11:47 PM

excellent feelings, excellent write. I give you a standing ovation for putting your feelings on paper like that and sharing it.

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