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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2006-06-29 07:28 AM


Quiet reflections,
fresco across the peripherals of mind
whispering earthly worlds
of secrets,
spiritual cities, harmoniously
speaking tongues
where tinted rays,
slice through
darkest nights
towering stone bastions
of
emblazoned household flames
crowd the senses
like a nouvelle cuisine
transferring mystical
into
replenishing energy
like a sentient thought,
pounding with unrelenting force
burning the deep breath
of images into history
gazes of ideas
passing through
like a ghost
in one moment,
edelweiss
turns into a widened microphone
sounding out words
of some
colossal congenial odor
wavelets
rippling
across some
shimmering globule
of suspended
antimatter
where everything
touches anything...
infinitesimal!
Yet, larger
then the course
of challenge,
insisting exact
simultaneous
accelerations
Hoisting the eye
to peer inside
long term certainties
on a shimmering droplet
of imagery
talking about
working together
materializing
into something
magic, yet real
undulations of wonders
are born
like a ball of suspension,
hovering as if by some
spiritual breath, deepening
the meaning of life
the meaning of
one single moment
with adoration
dangling right there
in millions of nanograms



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2006-06-29 07:59 AM


quote:
burning the deep breath
of images into history
gazes of ideas
passing through



Your megagalactic imagination can't be measured in nanograms ...

Fantastic writing!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-06-29 08:08 AM


ms leej, can feel you next door sometime...like my mind is a condo with cotton walls..enjoyed this ms
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-06-29 08:26 AM


Hey Margherita, good Morning
yeah, that impulsive imagination of mine certainly runs away with me...hehe
thank you for stopping by

D...Morning, yes sireee bub, I cannot help but find it amazing, how our minds so co exist in our morning posts sometime...(winking atcha) many thanks to my long lost bro...


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2006-06-29 09:15 AM


Quiet reflections...
...in millions of nanograms...



Thanks for the sparklers...

" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2006-06-29 10:41 AM


"Quiet reflections,
fresco across the peripherals of mind
whispering earthly worlds
of secrets,
spiritual cities, harmoniously
speaking tongues
where tinted rays,
slice through
darkest nights
towering stone bastions
of
emblazoned household flames
crowd the senses
like a nouvelle cuisine"

Nice Lee J.
But you had me at "Quiet reflections"

As always you brighten the morning!!

JL


Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Serena
Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47

6 posted 2006-06-29 11:42 AM


A very scientific relfection if I must say.
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