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vandana
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0 posted 2006-05-23 10:27 AM


When Iam alone,
At night,
I feel so lost,
Sometimes I feel lost,
Not having your love,
With me
But when Iam holding your hand,
I feel so nice,
Knowing that your love meant
Something to me,
And when you're away,
I realize
It is not easy
Staying without yoour love,
It is difficult to live,
By yourself,
When he is not there with you,

When Iam with you....

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2006-05-23 10:37 AM


nice and gentle, Vandana, reads straight from the heart

Margherita
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Eternity
2 posted 2006-05-23 06:32 PM


Sweet melancholy expressed by your heart.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-05-23 07:41 PM


beautiful
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2006-05-23 07:50 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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