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Breath Unplugged.....for Karilea
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Breath Unplugged.....for Karilea |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Breath Unplugged When a spirit is set free across the chasm there is a breeze that nibbles ripples into the lake even when breath is unplugged it holds a minute to navigate the loss and plant a pulse so quick that robins in cocking head turn in sweet bewilderment Listen to the dreams that come when you are open to dimension and time spreads itself and you will know that love has no boundaries and that it understands forgiving before your tear has left its small circumference on the pillow ------- Reposted for Karilea with thoughts of her brother, Robert/known as Fagin here at Pip. RIP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Listen to the dreams that come when you are open to dimension and time spreads itself and you will know that love has no boundaries and that it understands forgiving before your tear has left its small circumference on the pillow" Thank you for this Martie. I know Karilea will find comfort when she reads it. Rest in peace dear Robert. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Beautifully and sensitively expressed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh, this is beautiful and then He created the horse... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....sigh...the more we love, the more there is to lose...and the more losses we must share. Yes....that's the key word....yes, I do. This and other losses I don't know of...yet. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The hug of a friend is a wonderful thing at a time like this, and you give big hugs Martie. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
This is a lovely, well written poem. Kim |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Martie, what a gift!  ...jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ Such comfort held in this word-watch~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"...you will know that love has no boundaries " This is a complete truth. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"When a spirit is set free across the chasm there is a breeze that nibbles ripples into the lake even when breath is unplugged" It's beautiful Martie. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Martie - you speak nothing but the truth here and so beautifully too that it brings tears to my eyes. Not so much for the passing over but that someone should know this truth is so very wonderful. We all can gain comfort from your words whether grieving or not and you bring us together under the umbrella of "love". Very well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
When a spirit is set free across the chasm there is a breeze that nibbles ripples into the lake even when breath is unplugged Martie, this is absolutely beautiful not only lovely words, but a heartfelt understanding that will truly guide and serve a friend in need. God bless you for this |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
it holds a minute to navigate the loss and plant a pulse so quick that robins in cocking head turn in sweet bewilderment ~*~ Our father taught us to hold special these very moments. Robert is smiling in his thanks for this... I know, because I feel it in my pulse. Thank you, Sissie. I will keep you informed as to what might happen. Yes, I see Robert nodding over this one. Love, Sissie |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Wonderful Martie - Paul |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem was made all the more poignant with Karilea's warm and touching response to it. Love & Everlasting Light, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and you will know that love has no boundaries and that it understands forgiving before your tear has left its small circumference on the pillow All of us with pillow stains thank you for this... beautiful work! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, your sweet and compassionate touch is so felt in this. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hugs to you and Karilea. Ethel |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I didn't know Robert/Fagin, but anyone connected to Karilea/Sunshine has to be special. My tears for you, Sunshine, and my thanks to Martie for letting us know and for comforting Sunshine in such a beautiful poem. - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is so beautiful, Martie, so uplifting. Fagin...you shall be remembered as a truly Passionate heartbeat by all wha have read your words. Karilea? heart hugs to you, knowing how close you and Robert were, knowing how deeply you must be hurting. But he will always be there for you in spirit. |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
feels this he does aye White Gold Wielder |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Such a beautiful poem.  Andrew |
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