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Seasoned Heart
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Seasoned Heart |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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It is not breathing, that makes me breathe This vision of you dancing inside my speechless heart; That sometimes you dance, that each step replies To the beating of the heart, shall you dance forever for my sake; That this vessel which carries my consciousness shall not fail, And all I long to do is smile on a season of changing thoughts; That tastes all parts of you, and the lasting kisses of goodbye Be sat upon my lap in an alienated feeling of sorrow; It is not love to know, --but to know That seasons know the change, which heart shall feel first like first light touches upon these eyes be blinding And hearts shall be numb with those findings of love So duty to that oft called the soul,--and the connectivity Over past and past away, there is time in-between the dates No heart could ever know the time of its death Or the knowing of its first heartbeat. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Enjoyed reading this poem, you write love, slightly shadowed and withdrawn into corners, it is there...and gone and back again..but always dark...your choice of words are very good...and your poems overall are always more than worthy ..thank you..for the words.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You are a SEASONED poet,entire poem was perfect, you are a chip off the old block, your grandfathers quill, writes through your hand~ ~ARH  |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
GoldenRose, Thanks for the reply i guess it seems more dark love because i haven't really been that good in love its more a wanting emotion for me more than a i have emotion |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
A Romantic Heart, I'm sure my great-grandfather would of been proud but since i got told i'm banned from posting any of his poems for anyones view on here i figure his work will be only seen by me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is often a haunting feel to your poems of love. I get swept up in them and know not where I will be taken. Your closing lines are always memorable.  Warm hug, Linda |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Earth Angel, You know you're still my fave fantasy poetress thanks for the lovely words its almost like breathing when i write its like saying i know what love is so don't ask just read and know |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
like this one alot. it holds so much depth i it, i feel like i am being dragged into the poem if you knwo what i mean! so much power and control. i love it alot  leanne x |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
well, ur works are always amazing... what else can i say? ur a POET FOR ALL SEASON! *hugs* psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Lovely and slightly old fashioned. Perfect. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Hey,I like old fashioned ~ Shakespearean poetry! need more of it |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
You feel so deeply and express it so well! Enjoyed this so much! |
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