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Love in a Jar
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Love in a Jar |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
Love in a Jar I have pleasures stocked on the shelves of my dreams, Jars filled with passion and intimate waters, Overflowing my present thoughts with kisses of past lovers. Sometimes, I walk these aisles on lonely evenings, Opening one memory after another Inhaling the sweet scent of roses, cinnamon, and spring apples; These moments kiss my lips and cheeks softly Wiping away my invisible tears--- Tears that create new shelves of pearls and ice, In anticipation of new experiences and love, That will one day be stored in my heart. Marcel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely and tender.. may all your memories be beautiful ones. I very much enjoyed this gem Marcel. Hugs & Smiles, Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcel~ Oh, please send me the UPC Code for - 'kisses of past lovers; - I want to order 2 dozen cases of those~  Love to read you, poet~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully woven |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
very well written poem, i love how you expressed your words . i no how you feel for many times i walk an think of past lovers . very nice I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh! Yes! Perfect! |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
This is wonderful  |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
this is a fab poem like it alot. leanne x |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fabulous...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I especially liked the feeling of the heart storing so many good memories, much like preserves from the garden. Sweeter with time. Better and better Keith. TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A wonderful write, Marcel. So very much enjoyed by this reader. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Does doing up all those heart preserves make your kitchen as sticky as fruit?? Enjoyed this alot!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your jar continue to be filled with love! (Please forgive me, but I once worked as an registered nurse in a family planning clinic and my first response to your title lead my mind in a totally different direction than you obviously intended!  )Linda |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Oh how I love this...!!! That first awesome line was just followed, and overlapped with another and another and another....awesome line!!! much enjoyed... hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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