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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2006-01-31 01:53 PM



it seems  my dreams
have not  tortured me
  sufficiently

to pour Life's blues
in the darkest hues
onto the canvas

but it's ok,
for my colors remain true

and in Vincent's shadow I stand,
brush in hand
eye on the sky
wondering why though crows yet fly
inevitably over the grains,
my blues are never the same hues,
my yellows seem muddy
alongside the vibrancies of you

and if you, the casual observer may laugh at this,
thinking him always so dark and moody?
you shall never understand unless and until
you hold a brush in hand
and try to communicate
both heart and sky

but when you do you'll see
what is uniquely human
within him
and within

~me~


© Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
The Lady
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1 posted 2006-01-31 02:20 PM




"my blues are never the same hues,
my yellows seem muddy
alongside the vibrancies of you"

I love this poem Kacy. It seems frustrated.



Midnitesun
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2 posted 2006-01-31 02:29 PM


LOL, when Life's paints don't give me what I want, it IS frustrating.
Thanks for reading.

Bagger Vance
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3 posted 2006-02-01 12:29 PM


aye poetess
simply there... felt the touch of this gem
you write

White Gold Wielder

iliana
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4 posted 2006-02-02 04:22 AM


I understand.  I love these poems of Vincent.  I've been trying to self-teach art over the past years (I go in spurts and with different medium...haven't tried oils yet...afraid).  Right now, I've started from scratch again, working with charcoals, pencils, watercolors and pastels.  This time around working with faces.  I only wish I could put what's in my heart and soul out there in front of me...I do understand, Kacy.   ...jo
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2006-02-03 08:54 AM


I have not done so but I do believe what you say...you can't know until you try it yourself...

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-02-09 06:39 PM


Lovely...James
Martie
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7 posted 2006-02-09 07:07 PM


I understand, Kacy.  If I could paint with words what Vincent did with a brush, I'd be happy.  I guess we just have to be content with whoever we are.  
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8 posted 2006-02-13 12:39 PM


I like this very much... and am touched by it... even though I'm limited to admiring the efforts of others... my artistic talent is so lacking I'd be overjoyed if my hands could create something even I could recognize. *G*
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9 posted 2006-02-13 12:46 PM


Genius always intills that kind of feeling...you captured the difficulty of expression well Kacy both for him and you.....thank you..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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