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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-01-26 04:55 PM



Words to Suit My Day

I addressed myself
to see what it is that could be seen
when in that wear.

Not liking the view,
turning sideways, backwards
peering over the shoulder
No matter...

Disappointment reigns

Just a fantasy to never be
like second hand smoke...
a danger to myself in thought

Crossing paths only to be gifted
by words that fill
what my sighs cannot

A mind is a powerful thing
can twist you into nots
can turn your outsides in
and shake the foundation
until cracks form, crumbling begins
eventually becoming a collage
of past, present, and future
blending the mood into numbness.

Today is not just another day,
needing to be shared, just because,
because I can't forget
my challenged life...
to leave you
alone
when six decades
are yours
to own.

What a waste, I think at times,
cradling love in my memory
knowing
I am probably the only one
who could care to remember.

I can't be selfish,
because I had a great day
with hugging arms from those so small,
and lit up eyes telling me hello.
A good day
when I can feel warm
despite cold winds and freezing temperatures
and it isn't even February yet...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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RedStoneEB
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1 posted 2006-01-26 05:11 PM


Alot of days seem the same and people place special days in the year what feel like normal days depending on the feeling back in the caveman age i wondered if they cared if it were monday or any other day not that they knew they just knew of night and day passing its amazing how far we came
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-01-26 05:24 PM


every day is different to me...some more special than others...altogether they form a mind collage for me.

I have a  birthday dinner to share so he won't feel forgotten...

that's all this is~~  
*and as far as cavemen...I don't think it  has changed all that much

thank you

M

Enchantress
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3 posted 2006-01-26 06:43 PM


"because I had a great day
with hugging arms from those so small,
and lit up eyes telling me hello.
A good day
when I can feel warm
despite cold winds and freezing temperatures
and it isn't even February yet..."

Those sweet little arms wrapped around you
would warm the coldest days of January Maureen.

Love this!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2006-01-26 07:59 PM


I think teaching agrees with me...wondering why I gave it up years ago

thank you Nancy


M

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5 posted 2006-01-27 12:15 PM


Every day is special to you, because you are a special lady!!!

Hugs

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

iliana
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6 posted 2006-01-27 03:22 AM


"A mind is a powerful thing
can twist you into nots
can turn your outsides in
and shake the foundation
until cracks form, crumbling begins
eventually becoming a collage
of past, present, and future
blending the mood into numbness."

Sometimes our minds can be are greatest enemies; next in line is our hearts.  But....sometimes, one needs to listen.  If you're missing teaching, Maureen, there sure is a need for teachers who really enjoy there work and just don't do it for summer vacation and working around the family.  Enjoyed this immensely.   ...jo

Fee
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Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2006-01-27 06:21 AM


To those of us who are blessed with words and emotions, the mind can be a dangerous tool.
Finding ways to stop the thoughts, seems near impossible.
But a loving hug from those who care, can make it bareable.

BIGGEST OF HUGS,
Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

LeeJ
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8 posted 2006-01-27 07:29 AM


the self exploration in this is a greatness to you...this deeply touched me...and opened a door for some exploration at this end as well...thank you for writing and sharing.
Rick
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9 posted 2006-01-27 07:32 AM


M, I enjoyed this my friend, thank you for sharing with us all.

Sincerely
Rick

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2006-01-27 08:22 AM


Jo, I am only substituting until I can save enough money to take 2 courses needed to re-certify to get a teaching job due to No Child Left Behind and these new Praxis Tests...(they may need teachers in America but they are actually making it harder for the people to get the jobs unless you are just out of college or have transferred. ) I find it strange that they would rather hire  from out of the country than hire me or others like me and  allow me to take those courses later and yet I can long term sub at this moment.

but you would be surprised at how many teachers  near my age think I am crazy to start teaching now in the  present atmosphere of so much testing and not enough time to teach. That's why I am so busy, they are required to give so many tests to the individual child that they have to hire subs to teach while they are in the hallways  testing...strange methods and demands for sure.

In the meantime I am enjoying every class no matter the age...and I think I am accomplishing some good.


OH and the meaning behind the poem...my "estranged" husband's 60th birthday was yesterday and I felt that he needed  dinner out to celebrate  since I would be the only one to remember it.

Thank you for the responses  
M

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