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Fee
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0 posted 2006-01-23 05:24 AM


In the still of the night

Silence broken
By echo’s of the thoughts
racing through my mind

Awakening every part of me

Uncontrollable emotions stir within
As I lay defenceless
Powerless over that which now consumes me

I become lost in thoughts of you

Capturing every moment
We have spent in each others arms

Overwhelmed by the warmth of your touch

Longing to hear the beat of your heart
As I lay my head upon your chest

I am left breathless

In the still of the night

(c)FH

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

© Copyright 2006 Fiona Davis (was Hussain) - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-01-23 05:49 AM


BEAUTIFUL!!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-01-23 08:57 AM


Oh so lovely!!!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2006-01-23 07:56 PM


Fee~
Truly a lovely offering~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Martie
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4 posted 2006-01-23 08:13 PM


Fee...now I have that beautiful song in my head.  Thank you.
Fee
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5 posted 2006-01-23 09:15 PM


One of the best things about being here in these pages, is the beautiful thoughts and comments that each of you make.

Thank you for sharing my heart with me.

Hugs, Fee.

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

0'.".'0  Just
((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
(```)_(```)

Bridget Shenachie
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6 posted 2006-01-24 02:45 AM


Wow!  Most of us have had these thoughts, "sleeping alone in a double bed."  You said it well!

Thanks!

Shenachie

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7 posted 2006-01-24 03:28 AM


Beautiful!!

and then He created the horse...

littlewing
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8 posted 2006-01-24 08:32 AM


Fiona, what a lovely name.

I do know this, oh yes I do , very well indeed.  You penned this nicely.

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2006-01-24 06:20 PM


Fantastic flow of words...James
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10 posted 2006-01-24 10:57 PM



Nice work.



RedStoneEB
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11 posted 2006-01-25 05:01 AM


Was a mixture of emotions leading towards that of what others try love poetry
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