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jinx26
Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38
Jersey

0 posted 2006-01-21 11:27 AM



Feeling Lost....
In an illusion....
Feeling Him....always....
Keeping memories....
That should have never been....
Sometimes things are better left unsaid....
But still he reads my words....
Still I can't understand....
The walls that he built....
I'll never knock down....
What he's about....
I'll never figure out....
How he could just....shut me out....
In my head....the music plays....
BLACK....
I hang from the threads I call sanity....
Nearing the edge....
Balancing....
This life....in my hands.....
Fight for sanity.....
Or take flight....To save myself from....heartache


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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2006-01-24 08:18 PM


Could feel this.
Well written.
TD

Fee
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2006-01-24 08:58 PM


I feel the struggle you are going through. I hope it works out in the end.

Hugs, Fee

Expressions,
are the most important aspects, they create impressions

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((T))    Thinking
(..)(..) Of you
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RedStoneEB
Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk
3 posted 2006-01-25 05:14 AM


I've had heartache but i hold onto it, it keeps me pure keeps me wanting what i once had but not with other always the same person for with another its a new memory
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