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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-01-21 09:55 AM


Forget the Golden  ( of Silence)

I need the words that silence holds,
expressions hard to seize.
I'm seasoned well, a bit too much
so nothing comes with ease.

I've tried and promised, made anew.
Those differences that arise
sometimes have widened far too much
to hide behind disguise.

Better off "without-me-thoughts"
smithing words this morn,
thirsting for the days of old
when devotion was the norm.

Wondering what to do this day
to exercise my will,
to stay my thoughts to better paths,
to corner me until~~

Until, yes that's the word, the one
that holds me to its charms,
allowing me the presence of
the thoughts of loving arms.

Someday, maybe, perhaps, I think
all words of future means
have twisted me into a knot
that lives the in between's.

"Help-me-thoughts" to understand,
I ask with no reply,
in words that silence holds me to,
divisible by I.

Divisible, those times in hand,
the others far between,
exorcised to while away
this day of thoughts unseen.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2006-01-21 01:19 PM


Wondering what to do this day
to exercise my will,
to stay my thoughts to better paths,
to corner me until~~

Until, yes that's the word, the one
that holds me to its charms,
allowing me the presence of
the thoughts of loving arms.


M, of course it's all beautiful, but
the above verses just kind of grabbed me.

I so wish I could write like you, Maureen!!
Hugs,
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2006-01-22 08:00 AM


well I don't wish you the feelings I feel to write this way~~

hugs and thanks Ethel,
M

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