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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2006-01-12 09:07 AM



Power Struggles

Chose to stay the day
wishing for it to last a bit
breaking the work
to do nothing,
wanting to eat the loneliness
until digesting its encounter.

Ping-ponging the head messages
flirting with heart strides
trying to equalize
the thoughts of you
and take responsibility
for today's laziness.

Shoulders
carrying the unnecessary stress made
in doing so, reaching for an advocate
to wake up those emotions
of purpose.

Wanting restfulness but
loving to be challenged...
I feel the in between today.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-01-12 10:32 AM


reminding me of how we sometimes overthing and analyze situations working ourselves into a tizzy.  Made me feel like I'm getting a headache...very well done!
bslicker
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2 posted 2006-01-12 10:59 AM


(((((M)))))
in~between
bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

iliana
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3 posted 2006-01-12 11:24 AM


Maureen, wow, this was so well expressed -- know that feeling.   ...jo
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4 posted 2006-01-21 01:10 PM


Maureen, I know this feeling!!
You wrote of it perfectly!!
Hugs,
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2006-01-22 08:07 AM


Living scared day to  day Ethel...keeps the words coming

Thanks again all those who read
M

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