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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-04-10 02:34 PM



Tumbling down rolling
meadows. falling flat
to the ground.
Earth to my
back, watching the
sun shimmer out.
Close my eyes
to amber lights
of deepest dreams.
Realising images, absorbing
beautiful impressions, transfixing
my inner eye.
Rivulets streaming with
lime frond grass,
under pellucid blue
water; beamed flashes
of sunlights dance.
Ground rushed clouds
shimmering, mingling, shifting
shapes through rippling
corn, toasting in
summers nurturing heat.
Opening up my
soul, to let
it all in,
to suffuse me
with life force.
To be always so
open to the
perfection of mortal
life, before eternal
supremacy, is my
most fervent wish.

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Klassy Lassy
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1 posted 2006-04-10 02:43 PM


Imbibing nature and spirit, you weave gorgeous imagery.  I can see the crest of summer and life here in your words.  Wet gray days of spring still abound where I live, so thank you for the rays of sun!

  ~ Klassy

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2006-04-10 02:48 PM


Thank you klassy Lassy...i was merely looking forward to summer..it is not here yet either, but that is the beauty of mind and imagination isn't it?..

Goldenrose.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2006-04-10 08:26 PM


to sink into soft warm grasses underneath a cobalt sky...ahhh, the luxury of the moment!
now, my bones just warmed up a bit
thank you, Phil

Androgynous
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4 posted 2006-04-10 08:55 PM


"To be always so
open to the
perfection of mortal
life, before eternal
supremacy, is my
most fervent wish."

I take a bow for this one, enjoyd the read

Love

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-04-10 09:43 PM


so descriptive and vivid!
iliana
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USA
6 posted 2006-04-11 12:24 PM


Your journey to transcendence is a beautiful one...safe travels.......jo
sweetberry
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7 posted 2006-04-22 06:39 PM


Nice write! Very desciptive...I liked it!!!
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2006-04-22 06:44 PM


Beautiful writing Goldenrose. Lovely, vivid imagery.
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