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Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
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0 posted 2006-01-16 12:03 PM



Shifting between the moments of night and day,
caught gently in you breath;
we rock lifeless inside the crooks of arms
guiding our thoughts

inches away from goodbye,
like an old women
tanned with age, beaten with pride;
I risk everything for one last moment between the linen
that cools the heat from bodies overworked.

thirsty, I drink your fingers in slow sips,
faking only the little things
and sharing the riddles that have boggled my mind;
till tomorrows sun rises, leaving a yellow glow upon
your skin, hushing objections while days revolve

around the room, as windows smile intensely,
and jokes are told underneath the solemn blanket.
closets full of memories
spill with dirty clothes onto unwashed floors,
striking up discussions about politics and religion;

you said you were catholic
have you forgotten your guilt? it still travels
with the mirror you gave me last Christmas,  
sitting obnoxiously on the vanity, holding secrets
that have never been uttered past honest lips.

dainty hair woven between fists of pleasure
and the topics alter with each tick of the grandfather clock
this room shrinking, swallows gestures of good faith,
while goodbye is only one  simple word
complicated,
by  the mirror you gave me last Christmas.

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The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
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1 posted 2006-01-16 12:37 PM




Wow! Incredible job Dominique.

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12
Posts 643

2 posted 2006-01-16 12:38 PM


thank you Lady
Dominique-Simone
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3 posted 2006-01-17 11:57 AM


Just to let you know Lady I hope to be as good as you are someday.
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