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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-26 09:27 AM

Spreading of Time

I have no regrets for the spreading of time
For words heard last fill the emptiness, mine.
Reaching out, reaching to, untangles the taut
And the unfinished of, in the mystery sought.

Though Winter in Spring, there are memories stored
When warmth of the traveling of two brings accord.
And the harmony of, acceptance in kind
Fills my everyday thoughts with you-me in mind.

There's a gardener in me, who can wait for the bloom
Who can plant all the seeds, who straightens and grooms.
For the beauty then seen, in it's nakedness viewed
Becomes moment to moment of life, a prelude.

Today's just a day, where the leaves are swept up,
Collections in thought as I drink from the cup
Of tomorrow's todays and the more coming due.
I have no regrets in the waiting it through.

*Sunday Thoughts
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-03-26 12:45 PM

Maureen

It takes a patient person to be able to wait...I have trouble with it myself. The planting of the seed is quick, the wait for bloom so long! Yes, it's worth it...most things that take alot of time, are.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2006-03-26 12:48 PM

You know I think I like this the best of anything you have written. Funny I see the patience in it, but also a change in the person behind the words, and such a good one too. Patience is for B types M, I am a typical A

The message in this is definitely an A+

Waste not a second ~ Carpe' Diem

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2006-03-26 02:12 PM

Martie, I think after 5 years of having lost the once love of my life as far as marriage goes, I have learned a lot of patience..it has taken me this long to get my own thoughts straightened out and to know I can have a future despite the losses I have encountered during those years.

Sometimes I wish I had been less patient and been further along towards my future security.

Sharon, thank you...I was in a thoughtful mood this morning...could be the remnants of the flu...and besides it was too cold and windy to rake those leaves after all.

I do think there is a change in me...I am most happy now when my time is occupied...mostly with the "blooming" of the youngest generation.

Thank you both...
M

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2006-03-26 02:38 PM

Though Winter in Spring, there are memories stored
When warmth of the traveling of two brings accord.
And the harmony of, acceptance in kind
Fills my everyday thoughts with you-me in mind.

Maureen, I certainly know of similar thoughts.
And, memories are there to stay, sometimes,
aren't they?

Thanks for sharing your Sunday thoughts.
Hugs,
Ethel

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-03-27 03:50 PM

"I have no regrets in the waiting it through."

Wow!!
Consuming Poetry, when it's lived.
Great write.

JL

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Deep in the heart

6 posted 2006-03-27 04:17 PM

How I love it when you write right on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

7 posted 2006-03-27 05:03 PM

This is nice. And the waiting only makes the reward that much better! Nice write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2006-03-27 07:24 PM

good things come to those who wait
that's what they say

good write M

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2006-03-28 06:57 AM

Ethel, my memories are always in the background of my mind...popping up sometimes more often than wished. For some reason you can't compare memories to the now. The now seems to lose out.

JL, Thanks again

"I" ...well sometimes I am right and sometimes I just write

Always great to see you here. Thanks

M

Kristabell, sometimes the waiting let's the anxiety build... but sometimes we don't have any control. Thank you

Dixie, so they say

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