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LukeMW
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0 posted 2006-03-07 12:47 PM


Poem #3 here at Passions, written this morning as I got ready.


The spastic slashing crash of garbage trucks outside sweeps aside my forgotten dream
and tosses me out of bed to the grey weary carpet of my cramped hobo downtown apartment
The drenching sunlight creeps in the slivers of the window shutters
Cold sunlight, icicle beams, announcing another rotten dead-end day

As I sift through worn clothes I ponder

the existence of white sand beaches and crystal oceans and free wandering Carribean breezes and white marble courtyards and winding elaborate staircases climbed by gypsy maidens shimmering emerald earrings

as I step out on the foggy haze of a dead concrete penitentiary street
and wait in a forced Orwellian bus line

Off to work! Another day has come!

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Beneath the northern stars
1 posted 2006-03-07 03:49 PM


Jobs are a necessary evil!! (Today's my ONLY day off this week.)

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

LukeMW
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Canada
2 posted 2006-03-08 09:03 AM


But an evil nonetheless!
The Lady
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-03-09 04:50 PM




Well written.

icequeen
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4 posted 2006-03-09 06:59 PM


Sometimes I miss working... until now hehehe... Loved this!
Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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