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playing.with.crayons
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0 posted 2006-03-09 07:07 AM



Oh she will be perfect
Eyes with crystalline shine
and depth
Oh but
surely not intelligent enough
to answer back.

She will be about 6 feet high
But I'll be 7

A rank of mine to carry
high upon my belt
She will be beautiful
and she will be proud.
Because she will have me
to be proud of her.

Her legs, they go for days
but be sure
mine go for weeks
She'll be admired.
And I'll be commended.

Another badge
of sociological honour.




farewell the ash-tray girl

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1 posted 2006-03-09 03:17 PM


"She'll be admired.
And I'll be commended."

Aint that the way it always is o.O

Enjoyed; it suits my mood today.

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02
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2 posted 2006-03-09 04:06 PM


*sending you a virtual hug to improve your mood somewhat*

*and another one*

thanks for reading. xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

farewell the ash-tray girl

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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3 posted 2006-03-09 04:33 PM




"Another badge
of sociological honour."

I like this. Heavy subject.



icequeen
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since 2001-12-09
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FL USA
4 posted 2006-03-09 06:30 PM


This speaks volumes. Well done

Caroline

He who wants a rose must respect the thorn.
- Persian Proverb

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