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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I carefully craft words construction, Trying to place them where is right Highlighting my own destruction I ignore the crassness of emotion Arranging the words of my blight I carefully craft words construction. Depression over great elation Darkness over the stark of light Highlighting my own destruction. I fall not to the temptation To rearrange for a better sight I carefully craft words construction. Tossing words in grim manipulation From here deep within the darkest knight Highlighting my own destruction. I have been wounded beyond sensation As Id and Ego continue their fight I carefully craft words construction, Highlighting my own destruction Gloom Now there are three examples definition of form here perhaps Larry C can do One? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I fall not to the temptation To rearrange for a better sight I carefully craft words construction." Crafted well, a masterful write! Don't ever fall. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
I enjoyed this write and give you a standing ovation for your revelation of how we feel as writers. At least some of us. Huggs Kim |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Admirable work. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Enjoyed your poem, but (smiles) I DARE you to toss inhibition to the wind and fly on the wings of spontaneity for one miracle moment! - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 giggling at Owlie's reply.OK, make that a double dareya! |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, all I'm not sure what you mean Owl, could you explain? In life In poetry In form of writing? Gloom |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
correct answer might be (d) all of the above  |
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