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Fade
Junior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 38
on a (temporall) plane

0 posted 2006-03-06 12:30 PM


Always been the best

husband

that i could

sometimes
i may seem bad

in my heart,
though
know im good

working hard
for you and baby
a slave
just for your sakes

never been unfaithful
always true
and never fake

live and die for my family

fight hard
both tooth and nail
anything that comes against us
whether heaven or hell

but that aint good enough for you
you just aint willing to fight

i give up

im on my own

guess ill just lay down and die

but it really doesn"t matter...

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-03-06 01:00 PM


sometimes, one can be very hurt when taken for granted or not appreciated...but don't allow that to blemish the person you are...
for who you are is something awesome.



The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
2 posted 2006-03-06 04:07 PM



Such a desolate poem Fade. Good write.

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