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Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28
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0 posted 2006-02-23 03:19 AM



O'er ebony seas, a crescent sail
tows Venus through night sky,

Sparking with a laughing moon,
she's steady as they fly.

They sing in silent harmony,
cut swaths with a silver sword,

Taunt an aching, lonely soul
to anchor where they've moored.

Heart adrift in velvet waves,
bewitched by midnight down,

I wonder, by which fate bestowed
doth Venus wear Love's crown?
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~ Klassy Lassy ~
  7/26/2005

[This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (02-23-2006 04:44 AM).]

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desert-spike
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since 2006-02-01
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1 posted 2006-02-23 05:58 AM


Oh that was Lovely. I am fast falling in love with your work.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2006-02-25 07:38 PM


I absolutely loved the crystal clear visuals,
as much as the moonlight walk down by the sea.  

This is so me!!

Very nice writing, Klassy Lassy

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-25 08:19 PM


Oh so lovely...
hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

FNG
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since 2006-02-07
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4 posted 2006-02-26 02:35 AM


Awwww...beautiful imagery.

Venus with Missy Moon.

Love it!

iliana
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5 posted 2006-02-26 03:16 AM


Karen, this is a -- just love it!
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