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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when I was gypsy jean denim my anchors were tin foil with smooth seamed ends in the sand of day dreams drifting was swallowing the sensation of getting what was wanted temporary with plenty left on the plate of hungry for something more substantial I think was the word but I thought of rocks often heavy ones bigger than people but moveable if one had the time and mind to align them in rows wide enough for repetition and tall enough for protection but then with maturity I proclaimed that freedom was the curse of my cure for this wingless habitual ritual that had nightmared my galloping into visions of surrounding walls ________________ daark |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
This brings so many wonderful moments back to me, of a certain age, and those gifts that made a young man gleam - there is something priceless in wide eyes. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms noir, sometimes I wish you were next door whoops...that is a parking lot...oh well, maybe across the street..thanks lady |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
boy, isn't it funny, how then we thought forever would last...and we wanted everything instantly...hehehehe, this brings back amn moments of great fun, enjoyment, excitement...and yeah, some big mistakes, but I'd do it all over again...except stealing a dog...long story Enjoyed you this morning...Happy Friday |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms lee j..so you were the one that stole my mutt...now I owe ya...went by the site where jimmy bit the dirt yesterday...was thinking about this stuff..how we struggle to be safe and comfortable then complain about being confined in our security...jabber jabber jabber..thanks lady |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
between the two of you in your gypsy jean demin if only to have been boxed |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
You have the central truth....there are no walls at all, none that matter anyway....unless we build them. I'm going to stash this one in my Library. I like all of your poetry, but this one has a special depth for me, one I want to swim again. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms inky you need a spankin so bad nicely..thanks lady ________ James, humble thanks guy..am proud to have your thoughts on this piece |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "but then with maturity I proclaimed that freedom was the curse of my cure for this wingless habitual ritual that had nightmared my galloping into visions of surrounding walls" I admire your candor!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
tongues mute boulders high hearts descend thoughts fly |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie..nope, not my candor it is a free spirit (although I do feed it mice and things) but you can't have a pet candor in california..(thanks neighbor) _______________ ms KL, hmmmmm I like that..makes me think of places I enjoy. thanks |
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