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I'd be a Phoenix
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I'd be a Phoenix |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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I’d be a Phoenix I would be as the Phoenix Rise above my own ashes Touch the naked of my dreams In the dew of morning With the taste of longing And the sense of belonging I would be as the Phoenix With my soul as goal For beauty is a chameleon And this mirror would collect All these visions to inspect For my heart to reflect And from the spirit of the done All this to be fused as one |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Powerful poem Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
profound you are this morning sir Sy |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you do rise above all~ and bring a new to a day of old~~ warmth to cold~ and always a smile  My spirit will rise |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well...I think you probably will Sy.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I think you will too, dear Seymour!! Huggies,  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. LeeJ If you say so sweety. MGROVES Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Sharon, Perhaps, perhaps. LOL Ethel, Thank you dear. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It is not the being down that gives us measure of ourselves... it's how we choose to rise, what we choose to make of what "now" holds. *S* And you, my friend... will always rise with grace and wisdom... and serve the tastiest lemonade from the lemons tossed your way. *S* I like this very much!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Impressive sir! |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
I like this. I have heard several "Phoenix" poems but this is by far the best and most imaginative. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, Sy....I'd be one, too! *hugs*....jo  |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Very beautiful. Love it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you dear. Ed, Thank you my friend. iliana It's always nice to get a WOW. FNG, Thanks for the read and kind reply. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is excellent, though I really hate making an ash of myself. *grin* (sorry - I just had to do it) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox LOL I'll forgive you this once. |
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