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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2006-02-20 04:29 PM


Ripple love waves
across my lakeheart;
fathomless, mysterious, ardent.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2006-02-22 12:18 PM


I like riding across that lake and feeling the ripples underneath~

~ARH

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
2 posted 2006-02-24 12:04 PM




I love the way you put those words together... lakeheart... beautiful work.


exhale
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since 2003-06-13
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Alberta,Canada
3 posted 2006-02-24 12:11 PM


Utterly lovely.
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2006-02-24 12:29 PM


Few can weave tranquility and passion into the same cloth, especially with so few words, as you have done here.  Superbly done!

- Owl

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