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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
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Virginia

0 posted 2006-02-22 01:07 AM




It's only early Autumn,
But a sudden chill hits me.
Another leaf has fallen
From off the family tree.
                                        
You wouldn't think to see it now,
It looks so frail and small,
But it seems like only yesterday
It stood so proud and tall.
                                        
And I played among its branches.
I stood upon her roots.
She offered shelter from the rain;
And I grew strong on her fruit.
                                        
Lord, My God, it breaks my heart,
To see her standing there...
Barely clinging to the ground.
Her limbs so bowed and bare.
                                        
So many leaves have fallen.
So many others have turned brown.
The cold wind through her branches
Makes a mournful lonesome sound.
                                        
She's split and scarred, bent but hard;
She shows the signs of shock.
But her tap root is long,
Deep and strong;
And anchored on a rock.
                                        
Things are not always as they seem,
For the Wheel of Life spins 'round.
There are alot of little acorns,
Clinging to the ground.
                                        
The old tree's spreading branches
Still offer shelter from the winds.
And I find comfort in the knowing,
That nothing truly ends.
                                        
Every leaf that ever fell...
Offers life down here below.
From the warmth and strength that they provide...
A New tree begins to grow.
                                        
Some will play among its branches,
Some will stand upon her roots.
She'll offer shelter from the rain.
They'll grow strong on her fruit.
And with the passing of the ages,
When she shows the signs of shock,
They'll find the tap root long...
Deep and strong;
And anchored on The Rock.

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
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USA
1 posted 2006-02-22 01:11 AM


Bravo, Uriah!  Great poems tonight! ...jo
latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2006-02-22 02:08 AM


Very good. In full understanding of this one. martyjo
FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

3 posted 2006-02-22 06:20 AM


Hi,

Love the way you made the tree comes alive in your descriptions. Vivid and moving.


StevenS
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since 2005-09-21
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L. A. (Lower Alabama)
4 posted 2006-02-22 08:40 AM


Awesome!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
5 posted 2006-02-23 11:57 PM



It's just astounding! Beautiful ending Uriah!


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