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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-02-21 05:56 PM



Sincere Hearts of Two


I want to be able
to honestly say
that I love her.

I want my actions
to back me up,
to prove every
word to be true.

For love is so much more
than words, it comes alive,
finds a place to survive,
within the sincere hearts of two.


JamesLee
February21
2006



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JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-02-21 06:07 PM


Sounds like the beginning of a love song.
Nice write James.

JL


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2006-02-21 06:44 PM


Enjoyed.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-02-21 06:52 PM


Lovely James..enjoyed as usual!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-02-21 11:59 PM



Nice write James.

BlueEyes
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since 2002-08-30
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TX, USA
5 posted 2006-02-22 11:22 PM


This was beautiful...great job...
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2006-02-23 12:04 PM


Thank you JL, iliana, Enchantress, The Lady and Blue Eyes for the wonderful responses...James
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