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Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

0 posted 2006-02-17 05:32 PM

I meant to stop and talk with you,
  but you're always on the run.
I meant to spread some TLC
  where you've hidden from the sun.
I meant to show you that you matter,
  but I know you understand
I meant to make you smile today,
  but it didn't go as planned.
I meant, Thanks, for who you are,
  but it's surely not enough;
I meant broad shoulders, strong,
  kind hands, and a spirit tender-tough.
I meant to pray for you this morning,
  but only God knows that I do.
I meant to hold a heart of glass
  but for scattered shards of blue.
I meant to say, "I Love You"
  but fear you'll think the worst.
I meant to add just one more thing:
  it's because...you loved me first.

           ~ Karen ~
          Aug 16, 1998

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-02-17 07:25 PM

"I meant to say, "I Love You"
but fear you'll think the worst.
I meant to add just one more thing:
it's because...you loved me first."

You are a very talented writer Karen.
I very much enjoyed this piece.
Heart hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

2 posted 2006-02-18 12:23 PM

Nancy, hugs!

I posted this in the wrong forum...but this will have to do unless a mod removes it for me.

Thank you for the kind words about my writing. It has changed in the last year quite a bit with new exploration.

Karen

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-02-18 02:07 PM

Very good intentions...

so glad to see you in Open!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

4 posted 2006-02-18 02:38 PM

expressed beautifully

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2006-02-18 03:23 PM

There is still time to follow through on those thoughts. Well written Karen.

believe in what your heart feels...

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

6 posted 2006-02-18 11:41 PM

very nice..i like that...

hugs, g

"We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-02-18 11:56 PM

A lovely poem Karen.

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