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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-08-09 07:24 AM


social bonds wind up
wolves, in reunion calls
i’m stuck at a rendezvous
where time learns voices
while rival packs
advertise their presence
i silently move away
reluctant to make a sound
not wanting anyone to choose sides
or have an understated passion
eat me up….

nature’s complex call, of direct sound
echoes & anoints a phenomenon
introducing, a potentiality within
a lethal moonlit night...
where i’m void of a mate
yet, there is a chorus
of pure unadulterated tones
modulating a rare gift
of natural intuitive
like falling into a golden age...
beauty...
far more resilient then anything i’ve known

various tiny studios of detail and sight
boy, would leonard cohen
get a kick outa this music!

while lucious rain sways it’s song,
a catch tune sold out show
which sounds conversation
honesty shimmers a know

new-found confidence
with wings of a ballet
and i dance and dance
and dance
while moon light sways
God’s festival, kicking off
some center stage signature
and...i know
i’m not alone...

every woman out there
knows personally this emotion
not one iota of need
which when practiced
the longer immersed it be..

so i wake the day
it’s new and one of a kind
and according to my estimation
changed in meaning
which we'll try to teach to
welfare moms?

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-11-2005 06:39 AM).]

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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2005-08-09 07:49 AM


LeeJ
No you are not alone and it weighs on both sides of the scale. Good morning sweet.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-08-09 08:25 AM


every woman out there
knows personally this emotion
not one iota of need
which when practiced
the longer immersed it be..

so i wake the day

~*~

So many images from this wonderful piece...
but I noted no real peace within...

until the dance...
the sharing of woman to woman
in knowledge alone.

And the backing away from the pack...
of people who know us so well...
and yet we wonder,

how did we come from this breed...
fearing our own slightly elevated
insecurities...
yet we know we are not the invisible kind...

just the different one.



Thank you for this

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-08-09 08:33 AM


Lee, it is lines like the following that keep me coming back for more and more...

"new-found confidence
with wings of a ballet
and i dance and dance
and dance
while moon light sways"

~ You are a poetessa suprema!

Dance on!

Love & Light,
Linda


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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2005-08-09 12:04 PM


"new-found confidence
with wings of a ballet
and i dance and dance
and dance while moon light sways"


Perfect picture of dance.....agreeing with linda DANCE on...

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-08-10 03:53 AM


a deeply moving piece here

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Gaia
6 posted 2005-08-10 03:50 PM


"various tiny studios of detail and sight
boy, would leonard cohen
get a kick outa this music!"
absolutely

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2005-08-10 07:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
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