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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-07-19 10:38 AM



someday I will turn around
when you are behind me
and will touch your mouth
with my finger tips
before my kiss

you will hang your sundress
on the branches of my warm
and wear my arms
as your leather belt
my hands as your bodice

as the wricked trees in water
will crease our togethering
with the winds that bring
their gifts to the dawn
even before the night is done

with her blue lake seduction


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dark


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-07-19 11:04 AM


*sigh*
*melt*
oh D....
this is SO beautiful
love reading the soft side of you

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2005-07-19 11:18 AM


someday I will turn around
when you are behind me
and will touch your mouth
with my finger tips
before my kiss

you will hang your sundress
on the branches of my warm
and wear my arms
as your leather belt
my hands as your bodice

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*note to moth*
*get a sundress*  

my my ..you are just a poetic sigh arent you. *S*

Thank you clarity ... thank you frailty
Thank you consequence ...
Thank you ... thank you silence ...

Alanis

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2005-07-19 01:00 PM


ms sea, thannnnnks for the eyes and smile..


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ms JM..hmmmmm yes that lake is there...thank you for the view and..sundress thoughts

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