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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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0 posted 2005-07-19 10:18 AM



it was there again today
that small talk reason
like the seam of the sky
when the sun steps over

when you were a daydream movie
and I watched from both sides
til your secrets were tan
and you put lotion on them

so they shimmered lovely
when you raced your heart
to that other side high
so the waves would come

and you would be an ocean
where fingerprints didn't linger
you smiled at my hands
and gave them coffee

in lieu of a manday's candy
_______________

dark



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-07-19 10:23 AM



You come across some
lovely waitstaff...

and the coffee smells good, too.

SEA
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with you
2 posted 2005-07-19 11:06 AM


"when you were a daydream movie
and I watched from both sides"


awesome

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2005-07-19 11:21 AM


like the seam of the sky
when the sun steps over

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

yer so kewl.......
even your small talk is poetic.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2005-07-19 01:02 PM


thanks to each of you for the eyes..one of my favorite view of the mornings...with just a whisper of sun behind..



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