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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2005-10-31 12:59 PM


For all those who want a love song.


I want to compose you
in the key of beauty
placing you outstreched
across the staff grand
starting only with my hand
transcribing those loving bed spring melodies
from endless echo of silent wall timbre
exploring the gentle alabaster contour
of exhuberant gasping phrases
they play lyrically
lip bit soft and tender scale dropping below
to begin a crescendo and pitch raise
tempo increases, volume of voice rises
to explode in climax of oh so sweet harmony
leaving only two joined voices
in a duet of sweet sensation.

nice use of muffin



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1 posted 2005-10-31 01:58 PM


John~
This is positively LOVELY !!!!


*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-11-01 01:27 AM


A beautiful love song indeed!

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

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