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bslicker
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state of mind

0 posted 2005-10-20 01:35 PM


Still
.
.
.
Watching
As is known
With no clues
Of time spent
Years thrown away
Instead of future
Being of material
Again not looking
Into the real heart
Meaningless words
Lashing out in harshness
When only
Trying
Trying to do right
Not to end
But to begin
Not forgetting
Of time past
Being in love
Good and bad
Healthy or sick
Always there
When needed
Without the return
Turning gray~scale
To color
Still
Waiting forever
Of reasoning

Reasoning of

I Love You
Still
.
.
.
bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2005-10-20 02:04 PM


I felt the same~~ for awhile...
Nice write

M

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2 posted 2005-10-31 09:15 AM


The hardest assignments we ever have are the things we lay on ourselves to do -- or not do -- out of love. Of those, to be there giving what is needed and want what we are doing to remain, not just unthanked (which we might expect anyway), but unrealized...that's the hardest of all.

Hang in there bro -- you are not alone.

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3 posted 2005-10-31 12:06 PM


True love never really dies. It may take a different form, but that spark always remains.

I felt your words, for you expressed them well.


Linda

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4 posted 2005-10-31 01:12 PM


A soft and honest write Bernie.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs to you, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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5 posted 2005-10-31 01:21 PM


A touching write , Love remains forever in the heart

Hope

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6 posted 2005-11-01 01:53 AM


Hope
yes i does

and thanks everyone for reading

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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