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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-10-13 07:28 AM


My Eyelids

My eyelid blankets me at night
A magic carpet to new sight
It takes me the metaphor door
That opens to forevermore

Its here I dwell among the stars
And visit places much too far
Do all the things I cannot do
And bring this magic all to you

I climb the mountains of my seem
Build the castles of my dream
Pick the flowers of my field
To feed you breakfast on this yield

An argosy of ecstasy
A phantom picking fantasy
To weave for you a ring of wile
Sprinkling rose petals on the Isle

It is the ring I offer thee
It comes from in the heart of me


© Copyright 2005 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-10-13 07:55 AM


May I bring
some coffee
to this breaking fast
of ring with you?

As ever was, dear Sy...
you charm the morning
with your song.

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2005-10-13 08:29 AM


Awww, Mr. T., 'tis a wondrously magical carpet of words that you have woven for your fans this autumn morning. Flowers

Magic Carpet

Love & Adoring Light,
EA

LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-10-13 08:35 AM


well, that does it for me today, I'm filled to the brim...love your morning breakfasts, dear Sy...dear poet, dear mystical eyes....

love todays lesson, hugs and thank you

Enchantress
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4 posted 2005-10-13 09:12 AM


Nothing like a magic carpet ride first thing in the morning Sy.
This is especially 'uplifting'

Much enjoyed...
~Hugs & Luv, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2005-10-13 09:19 AM


Um, maybe it's cause your eyes, see more?

(I know, I know I'm bad.)

I deserve a spanking maybe?

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-10-13 09:43 AM


Sunshine
Thank you dear.

Earth Angel
Thank you love.

LeeJ
Good morning and thank you sweet.

Nancy


serenity
Maybe I'll just give you a big

StevenS
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7 posted 2005-10-13 01:59 PM


Always a delight Seymour, Thank you.
scorpio
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8 posted 2005-10-13 02:32 PM


Well done Sy.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2005-10-13 02:51 PM


StevenS
Thank you for the read and reply.

Thank you scorpio

Martie
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10 posted 2005-10-13 03:31 PM


Sy....How come my eyelids don't do all those things?  In any case, I'm sure glad you share what yours do!  
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2005-10-13 03:53 PM


Martie

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