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Temptress
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0 posted 2005-10-11 08:22 PM


discreet words rape savage emotion
draining their passion
is this what you really want?

"I want to heal, I want to feel, like I'm close to something real"
-Linkin Park_

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Larry C
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1 posted 2005-10-11 08:34 PM


I hope not. Especially from you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Angelheart
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2 posted 2005-10-11 10:13 PM


Oh my well, that is not good with using decreeting things, your right and so true on this poem, thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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