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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-10-07 02:22 PM



White
Lace curtains
And nothing
To do

A high rise cat
Left without all . . .

No teeth
No claws
Or rubber balls

[This message has been edited by Huan Yi (10-07-2005 05:42 PM).]

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RennieandBoo
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1 posted 2005-10-07 02:23 PM


awe poor kitty cat!
HopeS
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2 posted 2005-10-07 02:29 PM


Awwww how sad and lonely

Hope

Jeep Monkey
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3 posted 2005-12-18 06:41 PM


My cat fell out of the tree today. I didn't know cats could do that.  She has claws.  She has teeth.  She has no rubber balls.  If she did, maybe she would have bounced.

I like your poem.

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2005-12-18 09:14 PM


I don't know if fluffy is a he or she, but the "fall" was implied, so not a given, for me.

Could be the cat was pushed.

(sorry, too much CSI"

?

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5 posted 2005-12-18 10:48 PM


John~
Poor wittle kitty ... those lace curtains are safe ... but what an unhappy 'high rise' kitty~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-05-01 03:30 PM


idol..cat shaped in any material.
Artic Wind
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7 posted 2007-10-28 07:03 PM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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