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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
It was a sound like grated sand on an edge that you don’t wish to hear It was a sound of animal hurt that cried to human I am It was a sound of landing in pain that cried help It was a sound walking a bridge that had frayed beyond expectations It was a sound landing A sound finding A sound Home |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bodger~ Okay ... broken record time ...  Hope I don't sound like one ... HOWEVER, this is also some brilliant work~ 'It was a sound of animal hurt that cried to human I am' I would recognize that of which you've written ... immediately~ Good show~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Marge Maybe I needed to grow up Bodger |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bodger~ I happen to think you are VERY talented~ I hope you didn't misunderstand my comment ... I meant that I had just told you just how brilliant I felt your work was on 'Tiger' and felt the brilliance shining again in reading 'Landing' ... that was my 'broken record' comment ... ME sounding like a broken record ... NOT you sounding like one~ I hope to read much, much more of your writing ... I'd say you are VERY mature with your thoughts~ I think you are VERY talented~ Welcome to this wonderful world of words~ ***Check your email too*** *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< Email noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (07-01-2005 09:27 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
While we run from the noises of our home, at times... we can never run away from the truth that is within us... and we find ourselves coming "home" more often... especially as we grow older... Well done, Sir! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Marge The comment was not on your comment, it was on me and something I thought as I wrote. Sunshine Someone said to me "you can run away from everything, but you can not run away from yourself". Many thanks Bodger |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed very true |
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