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it's a movie in my head.
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it's a movie in my head. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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i think i'd like to say how i feel i'd rather not sugar-coat it or dance around the issue i'd like to tell you how hard it is to breathe when you know that all you live for is routine all you live for is the turn of a page or the flight of a leaf in an autumn breeze it's a movie in my head no, no i don't hate life i love it too much too much passion for something can tear you up inside and i'm tired of loving i'm tired of breathing in every moment like it were my last when it's far from it i'd like to connect to people not moments i'd like to hold hands with a person not fate anything but fate anything but fate this feeling in the pit of my stomach i can't tell you it's like a waterfall or a cool morning like a quick rain shower or snow falling i'd rather not sugar-coat it it feels like loneliness because i'm in love with love |
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Sharksbean Member
since 2005-09-25
Posts 368jax |
this is beautiful thanks for sharing  -may the force be with you in poetry |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Yes, quite beautiful. I especially loved the last lines. Wonderful. "The moon ain't romantic, it's intimidating as hell". -- Tom Waits, 'Bad Live and a Broken Heart' |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
i'm tired of breathing in every moment like it were my last when it's far from it i'd like to connect to people not moments i'd like to hold hands with a person not fate anything but fate anything but fate aren't we all in love with love? nice writing...enjoyed M |
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