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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-10-02 08:18 AM


Indiscrete

There is an ounce of indiscrete
Each time we pass each time we meet
Its mock is like a tweak of awe
A touch of shock a tweak of core

It holds me in wanderlust
With near a pause to self adjust
My flush outshines the sun of day
Yet still I cannot turn away

It holds me in a clumsy mood
Almost to a point of rude
I scrape my feet and flit about
As if I ate some sauerkraut

And indiscrete is there in heat
That makes me wiggle head to feet
Showing me a suitors clown
That turn the light of sun to brown

So please excuse this small impose
It’s not as if I pick my nose


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-10-02 09:59 AM


Seymour you are too much!!!


Thank you for starting my day off with a smile!
Hugs & Luv, Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-10-02 10:34 AM



Oh, Mr. T., you certainly painted a pretty picture of yourself!

"My flush outshines the sun of day"
"That makes me wiggle head to feet"
"It’s not as if I pick my nose"
~ But sauerkraut is good to eat.
Girl 5

May your day be as charming as you are!


EA

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
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Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
3 posted 2005-10-02 11:41 AM


That put a light moment in my day thank you
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