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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

0 posted 2005-09-29 10:56 AM

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come Love light my fire

wrap me in sunset colors

soothe my yearning heart

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-09-29 11:15 AM

Beautiful....absolutely beautiful!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-09-29 11:17 AM

Oh, now this is just lovely.
Keepin' it!

hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-09-29 11:32 AM

Margherita~

Ahhh ... soft words fall in beauty~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~<))><

noles1@totcon.com

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2005-09-29 11:39 AM

So lovely ~ So soothing ~ So serene...

May all your sunsets be so.

Hugs with love,
Linda

Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25

Posts 368
jax

5 posted 2005-09-29 03:48 PM

one of the most beautiful poems ive ever read thank you for sharing

-may the force be with you in poetry

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2005-09-29 04:35 PM

Oh Margherita!! This is absolutely stunning!!
Both the picture and the poem are superb!!
Hugs,
Ethel

CalicoMemories
Junior Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 15
the wind in the trees

7 posted 2005-09-29 04:37 PM

A beautiful expression. Serene picture as well

cm

I am one person.
I am a chorus of a thousand souls.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-09-29 05:56 PM

Very inviting, indeed! May love come!

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

9 posted 2005-09-30 10:07 AM

wow!

Obsidian Snow
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since 2005-08-24

Posts 88

10 posted 2005-09-30 10:08 AM

Beautiful senryu...truly touching.

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2005-10-01 04:41 AM

Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving comments.

Love IS there ... always.

Love,
Margherita

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

12 posted 2005-10-01 10:43 AM

Such a telling story and in so few words. Nicely done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2005-10-01 11:40 AM

Margherita....such beauty twice blessed!

sweetpoetess
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since 2005-02-27

Posts 428
Florida

14 posted 2005-10-01 03:55 PM

This is so beautiful. It made me smile.

Keep up the awesome poetry!!!

Poetry is beauty in words.

Angelheart
Senior Member

since 2005-09-08

Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA

15 posted 2005-10-01 03:58 PM

This is very nice, I loved the picture especially and the poem absublutely gorgeious. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

16 posted 2005-10-01 04:02 PM

Superb words my Lady

My meagre response

Bodger

Come howl inspired

Embraced in vision

Soothe my yearning heart with wild sounds

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

17 posted 2005-10-01 06:14 PM

Thank you all again my friends for your kind comments!

Dear Bodger, I enjoyed your response, passionate like a Latin dance!

Love,
Margherita

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

18 posted 2005-11-06 07:57 PM

(sigh) Sooooooo romantic, dearest friend, I know this yearning feeling way too much as I long to feel loves first kiss and stare out into the distance of the brightest pinks and reds of the most balmy sunrises and sunsets with my dream love! (angel friendship hugs) Yay, your poetry is always such a joy to read, it always makes me smile, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other"

Mother Teresa

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

19 posted 2005-11-06 08:52 PM

Absolutely gorgeous, Margherita.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

20 posted 2005-11-06 08:56 PM

Beautiful words.

Jason

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

21 posted 2005-11-06 11:53 PM

I'll echo the above..."beautiful"

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