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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-09-24 01:57 PM



I’m not
To think
About that

Oh no no no
That just won’t do

I’m going to Tara
Where everybody loves me

And nobody
Loves themselves
Unless and until
I love them first

© Copyright 2005 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754
Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-24 02:52 PM


The most true statement you can EVER say.. I learned from that too..  because I have been in Youth and it teaches all that.. thanks for sharing..  very wonderfully written...

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 289
Washington, USA.
2 posted 2005-09-24 04:34 PM


Very nice!

~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

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