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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-09-21 09:20 PM


Emptiness in my eyes,
Fall victim to their lies.
I am focused on what I am after,
The key to the next broken chapter.
Hollowness in thyself is bliss,
I am focused on what I am after,
The key to the next broken chapter.
What does thou in self miss?
I am focused on what I am after,
The key to the next broken chapter.
Why are you so bloody cold?
Thine self has rotted- stench of decayed mold.
I am focused on what I am after,
The key to the next broken chapter.
I am focused on what I am after,
The key to the next..open chapter!!

Time brings change and change comes with time

© Copyright 2005 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Angelheart
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since 2005-09-08
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Jacksonville,FL USA
1 posted 2005-09-21 09:50 PM


wow such intriguing words and wow look at that pictures.. lol you dont look bad  but that poem went right along of your picture .. thanks for sharing.

Poetry can get you very far
-Laura

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
2 posted 2005-09-21 10:08 PM


Snowflake - why are you so sad inside?
This write makes me want to sit down and have a long talk with you.
Chris

Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

3 posted 2005-09-24 10:39 AM


I pray your next chapter is one full of peace and good things.

Take care Kyle

He is so fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he cannot lose - Jim Elliot

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-09-24 11:23 AM


Hi, Hot Flakes! May you hold the key to the next "open" chapter and may you be writing of the many wondrous happenings that you will be experiencing!

Love & Light,
EA

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