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See and Hear |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I see it coming Toot! Toot!, Like a freight train These walls that have tunnels Ladders and stairways Perhaps they'll even dismount and crumble She isn't dead! God is alive! This beautiful blinding light Certain to show my path A green field before me A stone garden wall With an arched open walkway Clearly This door moves along Right in front Turn, face, and see it The furry sticks and black mask melt Into the wicker basket And angels place it upon its pedestal of shame Follow the calls of Wisdom She shows the way See it with your eyes Step into this life forever Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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Angelheart Senior Member
since 2005-09-08
Posts 754Jacksonville,FL USA |
this is a good read... thanks for sharing. Poetry can get you very far |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really enjoyed your poem. Very thought provoking. I liked the flow of it.  I'm not your type, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This reminds me of a dream I had. I feel the urgency; you conveyed it well. Enjoyed. |
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