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RennieandBoo
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since 2003-09-02
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0 posted 2005-09-08 02:18 PM



Don't try to fix me.
I don't need you
I wish to be me

please just leave me be
words don't mean a thing
I don't belong to you

I'm not broken
I'm not broken
feelings are still the same
inside your heart

Why do you want to  
don't you
fix me

Don't try to fix me
I don't need you
I wish to be me

Imperfection is just what I need
to go on
Don't
Don't try to fix me I'm not broken

Imperfection is at its best
Don't
please don't fix me I'm not broken
Hello

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marcel
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1 posted 2005-09-09 02:13 AM


And neither is this wonderfully expressed piece!
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2 posted 2005-09-09 04:39 PM


I recall saying that very thing to at least two husbands

What part of "this is what you get" don't people get?  They are always trying to make you into what they want you to be?  LOL, can you tell this is a sore subject with me?

I enjoyed it - and if it is from life - stand that ground!

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